Well, I've changed it, It now reads;
Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A warm welcome from me, CRGPeople are complaining about the newsbox being long and full of rubbish
- sorry, that's partly my fault.... ... I'll limit my typings - so here is a random poem.
after the announcements.
Visit
mmathsforum.proboards38.com/index.cgifansofmm.proboards30.com/the math nuts forum (but I can't find the address)
and
bubble80.proboards27.com/Is everyone looking forward to christmas?
Yes! I've just had an idea!!!!!!!
See the new thread that I'm just going to make up for details
but here is the poem
I was going to write one myself
actually about the forum
but I couldn't think
so here is a poem anyway
I'd grown almost to love this street,
each time I passed looking up
to pin my father's face to a window, feel myself
held in his gaze. Today there's a building site
where the hospital stood and I stop and stare
stupidly at the empty air, looking for him.
I'd almost pray some ache remain
like a flaw in the structure, something unappeasable
waiting in the fabric, between floors, in some
obstinate, secret room. A crane moves
delicately in the sky, in its own language.
Forget all that, I think as I pass, make it
a marvellous house; music should roam the corridors,
joy readily occur, St Valentine's
stubborn heart come floating from Whitefriar Street
to prevail, to undo injury, to lift my father from his bed,
let him climb down the dull red brick, effortlessly,
and run off with his life in his hands.
It's not brilliant is it,
but I typed 'poem' into google
and got that.
anyway
so that this newsbox stops being rambly
from CRG, goodbyeandgoodnight.
It's not quite so long, but I couldn't think of a poem,so it has a random poem I found on the internet. Is it better?